托福小作文?用詞準(zhǔn)確,邏輯清晰 托福作文的語言要求低于作文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)要求。托福考試只要求考生用完整的句子來表達內(nèi)容,對考生的語言專業(yè)能力要求不太高,因此更應(yīng)該注重用詞的準(zhǔn)確性和邏輯性。時間管理技能 首先,那么,托福小作文?一起來了解一下吧。
1. 求學(xué)霸看圖寫篇作文,80詞,最好帶翻譯
My time at junior high schoolhas been mostly good. I've been at junior high schoolsince 2004. In the first year, I made some good friends, and had a lot of fun. However ,I didn't do so well at school in Grades 6 and 7. I didn't study hard enough. Fortunately, my friends showed me that education is important for my future, and I began to work harder at school.I used to be a bit shy, but my friends and teachers have helped me to be more confident. Now I know that I have the ability to do good work. My reports in Grade 8 were much better than in Grades 6 and 7. I'm very happy that I'm no longer bottom of the class. Since Grade 8, I think Ihave bee more confident. I have learned a lot at junior high school. I have worked hard and I have enjoyed these last four years. I hope to do well in the final exam. I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me。
【參考范耐正拿文之一】
Why do people need to attend colleges or universities? Different people
have different answers to this question. I believe that the three most common
reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase
their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.
Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For
many, this is the primary reason to go to college. They know that the job market
is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of
opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are
expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.
Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences.
This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in
their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they've
been away from home by themselves. In addition, this is the first time they'清譽ve
bad to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their
knowledge of themselves.
Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or
college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many,
this will he their last chance for a long time to learn about something that
doesn't relate to their career.
I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. They should go
to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they
live in.
【參考范昌搭文之二】
People study in college or university for many different reasons. I think
the most important reason is to gain more knowledge and learn more skills. Of
course, there are also many other reasons that people study in college such as
to get more friends, and increase one's self-confidence.
These days, most jobs require people who are educated and have good job
skills. Therefore, the people who want a good job have to study hard and at
least graduate with a high education. Furthermore, as technology advances all
over the world, more and more education is required of people.
Some people who study in college or university want to make more friends
and increase their interpersonal skills. They enjoy their lives in university or
college and tend to socialize a lot. They can meet more people who have the
similar interests with themselves. They can go to uni ball after school and make
more friends who they trust.
The people who graduate from college seem more confident in our community.
These people are more respected by society. Many people want to be respected and
to be important by family, friends, their bosses, and others in their lives.
They find that most of them can confidently talk and do their jobs as they are
more educated. Therefore, most people want to get the confidence through the
university or college study.
In today's society, people need more knowledge and skills to be adapted.
The university and college study is a good way to achieve this.
【參考范文之三】
In China, more and more people try their best to attend college or
university. What are the reasons that make people long for it?
First of all, in my opinion, the most important reason is to gain
competence to live a better life in the future. Competition of our days has
become more and more drastic, and even a very simple job or low position will
attract hundreds of candidates to apply for it. Only those who have a good
education and general knowledge can gain better work. So, we should attend
college or university
for better competence.
Second, attending college or university can change our life. For example,
to myself, I am a student from countryside. I am one of the few people who can
attend college or university. Most of those who have not studied in college or
university go to work early in a small factory in a small town or on a farm in
their hometown. Just because I have taken higher education, I can get better
chances to study or work in the capital of our country where a lot of people
want to go to. Why? Good education gives me chances to change my life.
The third reason for attending a college is to increase knowledge. Study is
a so interesting thing that it make our life rich and colorful. It expands our
eyesight by informing us with lots of new things what we cannot gain from our
common life or experience. On the other hand, by attending college or
university, you can learn the knowledge or skill necessary for your future
work.
People attend college or university for various reasons. Some may attend
for new experiences, and others may think about other things. What I have
mentioned is just very few of them.
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【參考范文之四】
Mr.Taoxingzhi, the most famous educator in China, once said: the biggest
misfortune in one’s life is that one does not receive a uniniversiy education.
Needless to say, a university degree often helps a person achieve his goal with
more ease. However, do we attend university just in pursuit of a degree? Does a
university only provide us nothing benefieial besides a paper-made diploma?
As far as I am concerned, we enjoy a university education in the following
aspects which attribulates us to a university education:
Firstly, with the knowledge learned in a university,we will have a deep
understanding with our society. It is ture that genuine knowledge comes from
practice, but it can not be denied that genuine knowledge, tells us how to
practise. A thorough study in a college or university, of course, enables us to
realize how the society works and how to cope with certain problems arising from
it in a more efficiently, more skillful way.
Second, an university education usually make it possible that we acquire a
decent job. Because of an accomplishment of a four-year study, it is not
difficult for us to find a good job in most cases. How can we imagine that a
graduate majoring in astronomy has to be a vendor in the street! Undoubtfully,
he/she should sit in his/her labortory, making a reseach on aircraft on a
computor.Obviously, a university education assures him/her a decent job.
Last, but not the least, we can help others much better if puttiing what we
learn in a university into use. A university education corrects our values,
enhance our skills, and broad our horizons.
With those, we are moe capable of giving a hand to those who are in need of
help than before. “Knowledge is power”.When achieving a degree in a university,
we can get a better understanding of the society, find a decent job in an easy
way, and help others better. All of those are due to the knowledge learned in a
university.
【參考范文之五】
People attend a college or a university for the following reasons, to
acquire knowledge which is necessary for a career, to contribute to the society,
and to experience life.
Firstly college education is a necessary step for a person who wants to
start a career in science and technology areas. If a student wants to become a
scientist, it is important for him to go to a science school; if he wants to be
an engineer, an engineering school is the best place for him.
There is no other place than a college where a student can get
sophisticated education in order to be qualified to become a professional in a
specific area.
Secondly, a college education can benefit both the society and the student.
By attending college one can get himself prepared for and contribute to the
society, which seems to demand advanced knowledge more and more. One the other
hand, as knowledge plays a very important role in today’s economy, it has also
become the capital and asset of the person who owns it: a college education can
bring wealth not only to the society, but also benefit the individual who
processes it.
In addition, college education is a wonderful experience in one’s life.
Only in a college one can be taught by the finest scholars and meet with the
most intelligent people in the nation. Education can also bring happiness to the
student. When a student has conquered a difficult mathematical problem, he
savors the joy which learning has brought to him, and feels that he is the
happiest man in the world.
Of course, learning in a campus does not mean as much for everybody, but it
does mean a lot to me. I was brought up in a knowledge-respecting family. My
farther is an engineer and my mother is a teacher in a primary school. They are
both university graduates. My father, being the most influential person in my
life and the son of a poor Chinese farmer, did change the destiny of his own by
learning hard to earn a university degree. Therefore he firmly believes that
“knowledge can change one’s destiny and university is the best place to achieve
one’s goal”. Of course this influenced me. I strongly believe that attending
university is the best choice for me. I do not have a bit of hesitation to
attend a university.
作文考試的分?jǐn)?shù),在托??荚囍械恼急仁欠浅8叩?,所以大家需要認(rèn)真的進行準(zhǔn)備,保證考試順利。跟著的我看看托福作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)介紹。
一、托福寫作的內(nèi)容
托福包括2個內(nèi)容:綜合寫作和獨立寫作
(1)綜合寫作
綜合寫作也就是我們常說的小作文,但是為什么名字是綜合寫作,當(dāng)然是有原因的了,我們都知道小作文要求是150字左右,但是托福小作文的精妙之處就在于它的綜合考察。首先,會給你一篇passage,文章內(nèi)容會就某件事來表達一個觀點,之后你會聽到一個lecture,lecture表達的是與文章完全相反的觀點,聽完之后才到你來寫作的部分,所以綜合寫作部分之所以為綜合,是綜合了聽、讀、寫三者一起的作文。
(2)獨立寫作
看到獨立二字大家也可能猜到這部分寫作考察我們什么了吧,獨立考的是我們獨立的思考,對于獨立寫作的類型大部分都是disagree or agree 的類型,所以需要你同意或不同意一個statement,表達自己的觀點。而獨立寫作題目的妙處就在于無論你是同意還是不同意,你都有很大的空間去論述你的觀點,可見出題的深思熟慮。
第一篇作文:
New findings in scientific areas can examine and challenge previousassumptions. A recent finding concerning the meerkat, a burrow-dwelling animalin the African grasslands, has cast doubt upon the conventional ideas ofaltruism, the type of behavior in which an animal sacrifices its own interestsfor the benefit of another.
Meerkats were previously thought to be a typical altruistic animal. Whenthe other meerkats feed, there is usually one meerkat watching out forpredators. The sentinel meerkat gains nothing, it seems, for it can neither eatnor escape quickly and successfully after raising an alarm.
However, in the new findings, it's shown that the sentinel meerkat hasalready eaten food before standing guard, thus contradicting the thought that ithas an empty belly while on the lookout. In addition to this, the sentinel isthe first to see a predator, so it is the first to escape. It is also placednearest a burrow, making it relatively easier to flee. Moreover, its alarm callsmay cause the group either to gather or to spread rapidly, which may attract thepredator's attention, providing the sentinel a better chance to escape.
吵旁The same is with supposed human altruistic behavior. Organ donation tostrangers may be considered an unselfish act, which provides little reward tothe donator. However, by donating his organ, the donator may most probablyreceive praise and appreciation from others. Isn't this non-material reward,which increases one's self worth, satisfactory to anyone?
第二鋒碰銷銀游篇作文:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Good teachers are more important to a child's development than goodparents.
Parents and teachers are both important people to a child. Some people say,"Good teachers are more important to a child's development than good parents."However, I do not agree with this statement.
"Parents are the first educators of a child." Indeed, when a person is borninto this world, the first people he is in contact with everyday are hisparents, whereas a teacher can only come during a later stage in the child'slife, and may leave him after just a few years.All through the child's childhoodand puberty, parents exert a subtle influence on him, teaching him what to lookup to and what to become.
In the early years of a child's life, his parents are the ones to teach himthe basics of life and the principals of living. They are the ones to teach himhow to pronounce the first word, how to stand up and take a few steps, how togreet elders, and in the process of which, they give him the first glimpse oflifehow learning, strength of character and etiquette are essential to oneperson. These are what my father and mother taught me when I was too young to goto school.
Good parents set a good example for a child to abide by, whereas badparents usually do not have well-behaving children. Isn't it said, "Like father,like son"? Parents are the first people a child learns to respect, because theyare his guardians, his elders tied by blood. Being a good parent doesn'tnecessarily mean that he or she must be knowledgable, or must be able to speakbig, wise words that may be difficult to understand. If a parent can teach thechild how to behave by behaving himself, he is a good parent even if he isilliterate, or is poor. Thus, a child's character is usually shaped and moldedbefore he attends school under the influence of his parents, and that is morethan a good teacher can do to the child with the bearings of knowledge.
Good parents are essential to a child's development in that they are thefirst ever to teach him and that what they deliver is more about life and spiritthan knowledge. What they can do is more than what a good teacher can. Itsuffices to say that good parents are the most important people to a child'sdevelopment, and not good teachers.
托福小作文結(jié)合了聽力、閱讀和寫作3個部分內(nèi)容,很多同學(xué)擔(dān)心這余雹些部分寫不好,那么如何應(yīng)對托福小作文呢?接下來就從托福小作文的的提升攻略、提升技巧等方面做個簡單的闡述:
如何應(yīng)對托福小作文呢
一、托福小作文提升攻略
1、summarize,也就是概括閱讀和聽力文章的主要內(nèi)容和各三個分論點。這其實就是Introduction要寫的內(nèi)容,掌握了概括,第一段就不成問題了!
2、Paraphrase,也就是改寫。掌握好了改寫句子,你寫起文章來將會感覺到如魚得水,游刃有余。方法其實也很簡單,總結(jié)起來就兩點:使用不同的詞匯和使用不同的句型。
二、托福小作文提升技巧
1、語法突破:其中必備四大語法結(jié)構(gòu)即是:①句子結(jié)構(gòu) ②從句 ③非謂語動詞 ④倒裝、強調(diào)、平行結(jié)構(gòu)、一致
2、詞匯要求:在托福寫作中詞匯的要求應(yīng)該是4000—5000個積極詞匯,這里指的是會用,不止是單單的認(rèn)識單詞哦!其中,學(xué)習(xí)詞匯三個重中之重便是:①動賓搭配。 ②介賓搭配。 ③修飾原則。 此乃應(yīng)對新托福寫作詞匯要求之三大利器。
3、思路拓展:有的考生英語水平雖好,但常??嘤跊]有思路。那針對這種情況,我們對思路擴展提出兩種方法,能迅速有效幫助學(xué)生解決這個問題。
以上就是托福小作文的全部內(nèi)容,一、托福小作文提升攻略 1、summarize,也就是概括閱讀和聽力文章的主要內(nèi)容和各三個分論點。這其實就是Introduction要寫的內(nèi)容,掌握了概括,第一段就不成問題了!2、Paraphrase,也就是改寫。掌握好了改寫句子。